Final Cut Feedback

Positve

• Shots of the businessman walking were good.
• Some of the shots were quite well done, like the shot of the lorry obscuring the view of the businessman.
• Quick editing added to the effect and mirrored the fast pace of the song.
• The narrative was clear "About a man leaving his old life behind".
• Good dissolve over the hooded man to the businessman.
• Blurry effect was good (on escalator and at the end) - gave the impression that it wasn't all real.
• Good shot going up the escalator - can't see the face of hooded man at the bottom.
• Good blurry shot at end disguises the identity.
• Not meant to be taken literally - like 'Lost Highway' (1997, Lynch) where the main character creates an alter ego that relives his past. Talks to himself in the speaker phone.
• Very much telling a story, similar to other videos of the same music genre.
  

Constructive

• The colours of the mise en scene were limited.
• Probably too many shots of walking, there could have been more of a variety of themes.
• Didn't understand the narrative - a few continuity errors.

Neither

• Unfortunate about the overcast weather conditions, as this changed the videos atmosphere to a dull one, which is presumably an unintentional impression.