Rough Cut Feedback

Strengths

• Creative shots and transitions.
• Camera angles are good.
• Good use of costumes.
• Great over the shoulder shot near beginning.
• Great locations.
• Good dynamic camera shots.
• Good transition over business man and hooded man.

Weaknesses

• Story flaws and no ending.
• Could do with steadier camerawork.
• Slightly confusing storyline.
• Needs completing.
• Close ups on White background are bland.

Ben's Feedback (Industry Editor)

• More variation on shots, no repetitions e.g the transitions dissolve across the businessman and hooded man.
• Needs a big ending due to the big build up - confrontation betwen the two characters.
• Good quirky story - Groundhog Day/Trading Places theme.